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Echoes Before It Happens - Part 15: Zaiyen’s Diary

 📓 Echoes Before It Happens: Zaiyen’s Diary  

🗓️ Part 15: Who Is Writing My Story Now?  

✍️ By Zaiyen


Since I turned to the last page…  

something changed.


The diary stopped showing future entries.  

It was now completely blank.


But every time I touched my pen to the page —  

**words appeared by themselves**.


Not typed.  

Not printed.


But written…  

in my own **handwriting**.


---


It began with one word:  

> “Hello.”


Then more:


> “You weren’t supposed to look.”  

> “Now I write, and you obey.”


I dropped the pen.  

But the writing continued.


> “Run to the window.”  

> “Now.”


I hesitated.  

But something in me moved.  

And I ran.


Just in time to avoid…  

a ceiling fan crashing down where I stood.


---


The diary knew.  

Or the thing writing inside it — did.


It began controlling my actions,  

one sentence at a time.


> “Don’t go out today.”  

> “Wear the blue shirt.”  

> “Answer only the fourth call.”


I started losing control.  

Not just of the diary…  

but of **my own life**.


---


I tested it.


I disobeyed a small line.


> “Don’t drink the tea.”


I drank it.


Moments later,  

my stomach twisted.  

I collapsed.


Woke up in a hospital.  

They said it was mild food poisoning.


But I knew…  

the diary was warning me.


Or was it punishing me?


---


Then came the next message:


> “You’re not the only one I’m writing now.”  

> “She’s reading too.”


Who is “she”?  

Another reader?  

Another life?


Another version of… **me**?


---


If I’m not the one holding the pen anymore —  

then what’s left of *me*?


🖋️ — Zaiyen


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